the edges of myself

words, words, words

i’m vastly more pro-

ductive when i’m making up

my own dirty rules.

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  1. miguelalex888's avatar miguelalex888 says:

    Love the way you cut up the word productive in the middle of a line!

    1. mandytigre's avatar mandycregan says:

      thank you! it came to me in a visual flash– i realized i needed to manipulate the form rather than allowing it to manipulate me.

      1. miguelalex888's avatar miguelalex888 says:

        That’s a good way to put it. Messing around with line length and the exact point where you end them, that’s an important part of poetry.
        Own it!

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